http://Moni/ ([identity profile] moni) wrote in [personal profile] deplore 2012-12-26 07:53 am (UTC)

i really dnt know what to tell you... im just glad you didnt post it on christmas day lol.
The story was really good and it flowed well. even though i would of liked a fairytale ending, you ended it well. soft but strong if you know what i mean. it reminds me of what my mama tells me sometimes, some people just know when they are going to die. They reach a point where everything they were send to do has been done and everything is in the rightful place. they finally find tranquility, peace. People around them just know as well....
sigh, yixing.... ;_;
oh god its almost 2am idk if what i wrote made any sense (not like i make any sense when m fully awake).

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