ext_171740 ([identity profile] digindeeper.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] deplore 2012-11-22 07:47 am (UTC)

omg this was amazing. the characterisations were spot on, especially the way you described Chanyeol: Chanyeol is by far the most accessible, with a reputation for being cheerfully personable - he also has a fairly well-established friendship with Baekhyun, which is another bonus - but Zitao can sense a certain calculating air around him

Calculating - yes. he's not fake, but there's that something there that you know is way more attuned to everything around him than he seems.

the plot is absolutely lovely. i used to live off shoujo manga so i already loved the premise of the whole thing.

all that, and you're just an amazing writer. sigh. you gave me fuzzy feels.

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