ext_247953 ([identity profile] saracupcaked.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] deplore 2012-11-14 10:18 pm (UTC)

your prose fits so well into this universe: it's clean, almost to the point if clinical but there's still heart in it and it just reflects on the characters and makes it more bittersweet. i love how you've kept sunggyu with hoya and sungjong because their dynamics just work so well - the part where sunggyu says he's sungjong's legal guardian and hoya is his older brother made my heart ache ;__;

“The past tense doesn’t mean anything when time can click back just like that, I think,” Woohyun says, serious and thoughtful
my favourite line because it's so woohyun and poignant

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